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ripped hearts by =Rikari8900:iconRikari8900:

Categories Literature > Poetry > Human Nature > Open


have you ever poured your soul into a piece of art,
then given it away,
have you ever felt so hurt when it is returned ripped up,
they don't hear what you said and your heart hurts so bad,
my angel btrayed me and my heart is bleeding,
what can i do but i know i can count on you.
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Submitted: May 22, 2008
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just a short piece. i need comfort the one that hurt me like this was :iconloveanotherday123:
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~are-we-worth-saving:iconare-we-worth-saving: May 22, 2008, 6:38:28 PM
Have you ever heard of grammarcheck? I know, that wasn't a tasteful comment, but I would make the poem seem so much more refined and clear; it has a lot of potential.

Shane

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'...My voice just echoes on these walls'
=Rikari8900:iconRikari8900: May 22, 2008, 6:40:40 PM
well i type fast and the one who hurt me fucked up my keyboard but thanks for the comment.

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music=life
~are-we-worth-saving:iconare-we-worth-saving: May 22, 2008, 6:43:37 PM
That sucks, I've heard of tire slashing and vandalism, but keyboard violence? That's just really, really low. I envy you, though, I'm the worlds slowest typist.

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'...My voice just echoes on these walls'
=Rikari8900:iconRikari8900: May 22, 2008, 6:46:12 PM
i got faster over the years.

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music=life
~5-of-4:icon5-of-4: May 23, 2008, 6:52:18 AM
awe sorry to hear that

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5 out of 4 people have trouble with fractions ^-^~-~`
=Rikari8900:iconRikari8900: May 23, 2008, 3:06:27 PM
:hug: it's okay now. we made up.

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music=life
~5-of-4:icon5-of-4: May 23, 2008, 3:19:26 PM
cool

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5 out of 4 people have trouble with fractions ^-^~-~`
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